how not to mary sue PT.1how not to mary-sue Pt.1
by passed oc's
Okay girl's looks like you all passed your sue test's with flying colors why don't you tell the other how you did it?
first up- Leggy and Elfin (Hobbit and LOTR) medieval times fantasy
ELfin: well one thing you should note is that it helps to keep your OC "in time" meaning it's simpler to make a story when your Charter has grown up in the world and is fully aware of the world and isn't just trying to learn on the job. this will give your character a more realistic fell to them.
Leggy: also try to keep in mind the style and the way things are said in the time. do your homework and look at the way the other Charters dress,act and talk try to stay away from modern forms of cloths like hobbies and sneakers and saying like ain't. we say isn't or innit.
Elfin: And do make sure your character cloths fit the job to a dress isn't really the best thing to go into battle in just as armor isn't the best thing for a spy to have and long hair